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66. What makes your characters smile? – Daily Writing Advice 66

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This is a powerful question that helps you get to the heart of a character. Let me know your answer(s) in the comments below!

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65. When you’re stuck with writing, approach from another angle – Daily Writing Advice 65

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When I’m struggling to write, rather than giving it all up, I often change my approach. Coming at a story from another angle can free you, and help produce your best writing even when you don’t feel like it.

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64. Show vs tell? Decide by asking: is the process interesting? – Daily Writing Advice 64

If it’s an interesting process/journey/event, then you should show it in your story.

If the process isn’t compelling and you just need readers to know the outcome, then you may consider telling.

Neither approach is better. It’s about picking the best one for each specific scene.

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63. A time saving fantasy world building question – Daily Writing Advice # 63

Do you need it? If you don’t, then maybe don’t waste time worrying about it.

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62. What your character wants vs what they need – Daily Writing Advice # 62

Understanding the difference is the key to creating captivating character arcs.

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61. There is no shortcut to becoming an incredible writer – Daily Writing Advice # 61

There is no shortcut. And if you’re desperate for one, you might not truly be in love with the process.

I’ve been doing this since 2012, and I still consider myself a massive newbie. After all that time, I’ve just got my first book coming out into the world. And I’m stoked with that, because I love the process so much and I love all the challenges ahead of me. Writing makes me feel alive. If it does the same for you, then it won’t matter that there isn’t a shortcut – because the long road will be worth it.

Don’t ask, ‘what’s the least I can do?’

Instead, ask, ‘what’s the most I can bare?’

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60. Don’t talk about your stories until you’ve written them – Daily Writing Advice # 60

As tempting as it may be to discuss your story ideas with friends, you have to be careful. In my experience, I’ve sometimes found that talking about stories you’re going to write can delude you into thinking you’ve already written them. After all, if friends say that your story sounds cool, you might feel like you’ve done your job as an author – this, your motivation to actually write the darn thing may decrease. If you keep it pent up inside you, however, and only start talking about it once you’ve done the first draft, it will motivate you to write that first draft as quickly as possible so that you can share it with the world. For instance, I almost always only talk publicly about stories that have moved beyond the first draft.

Plus, there’s the other downside of talking about stories you haven’t yet written: your walk probably won’t match your talk. I see so many people talking about all the great stories they’re going to write, and how they’re going to be an awesome author … but their actions don’t map to their ambitions. They’re taking the talk, but not walking the walk – not actually getting into the grind of pumping out that story.

On the other hand, selective and careful discussion of your story can help improve ideas and spot errors before you waste time writing them. Like with so many things, this is about intentions. If you’re telling someone your story idea to seek approval, it will probably be counterproductive. If you’re telling them with an open ear for critical feedback, you will win.

Ultimately, you have a choice: talk about the stories you want to write, or actually write them and then talk about them. I suggest you do the second.

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59. Use tracking to be a more productive writer – Daily Writing Advice # 59

For over a year and a half, I’ve used a spreadsheet to keep track of basically everything I’ve written. It’s become a valuable habit that encourages productivity. Particularly in the first draft phase of a project, it helps me stay focused and make substantial daily progress. It can do the same for you!

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58. How to ask for feedback on your writing – Daily Writing Advice # 58

Don’t ask ‘did you like it?’

Instead, ask:

1) What bores you
2) What confuses you
3) What don’t you believe
4) What’s cool? (So I don’t accidentally “fix” it.)

These questions come from Mary Robinette Kowal, who uses them for early beta readers (http://maryrobinettekowal.com/journal/how-and-why-i-use-online-alpha-readers-while-writing-novels/). What’s great about them is how they focus readers on giving big picture feedback, which prevents them obsessing over micro details that will probably change anyway (I.e. spelling errors).

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57 Top 5 writing lessons learnt from narrating my fantasy audiobook don’t make my mistakes! Daily

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1. Prefer free indirect speech over direct thought
2. Avoid tricky punctuation and formatting
3. Take regular breaks
4. Voices are hard, so work them out beforehand.
5. You can do this yourself – even on a budget.

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